Today I went back through the
rough cut with my teacher to get even more feedback and to make I was
aware to all the minor issues as well as the more obvious ones. Here is the
list of things we picked out:
- 00:409 Pan too fast
- Buy the Song as this is poor quality
- Correct shot 00:34-00:35 as shot does not fit
-Shot 00:57
- Cycling too fast
- remove tree shot
- 1:48 cycling shot wobbly
- Increase length of bridge shot
- Stabilize grass shot 1:59
- 2:05 Biking shot
- 2:10 remove bridge dip
- 2:25 remove cycling shot
- 2:51 Out of sync
I will improve all the problems listed plus the ones from my class mate list for a 2nd rough cut for this Friday so that I can receive more feedback next week.
- 00:409 Pan too fast
- Buy the Song as this is poor quality
- Correct shot 00:34-00:35 as shot does not fit
-Shot 00:57
- Cycling too fast
- remove tree shot
- 1:48 cycling shot wobbly
- Increase length of bridge shot
- Stabilize grass shot 1:59
- 2:05 Biking shot
- 2:10 remove bridge dip
- 2:25 remove cycling shot
- 2:51 Out of sync
I will improve all the problems listed plus the ones from my class mate list for a 2nd rough cut for this Friday so that I can receive more feedback next week.