This is a sample of a commentary of our original, undetailed and messy storyboard. We were told that storyboards, to be fully functional and useful, the pictures had to be atleast somewhat comprehendable for an outside audience. This lead us to create a better, more detailed storyboard which then featured in the final voiceover. The reason why I changed the storyboard to make it overall better and in-depth is because I was told that the storyboard was such a huge part of the planning phase and giving it a lackluster level effort was an absolute waste.