A summary of all the feedback we received essentially boils down to our lack of a coherent video idea at the time, due to the lack of a fully complete and detailed storyboard. This criticism is completely just as during the presentation we only had a segment of the storyboard completed and that segment itself ended up being scrapped and completely redone.
Aside from that the other feedback we received was generally rather good, with our confident stage presence and very good website being noticed and commended upon,